Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 8, 2020
Creative Cakes
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey Fletcher, cool cake! You have made a great start, your drawing looks fantastic, but it would be great if you posted another picture once you have finished. Remember to check everything that your cake needs in the instructions for your task. It needs to have at least 5 layers with decorations on each layer, plus labels for the flavour and colours of each layer. Happy Friday! Caitlin :)
ReplyDeleteHey Fletcher, you have made a great start and I can't wait to see the finished product. Like Caitlin said, make sure you check everything that you needed to have for the task to be completed. Mrs O
ReplyDeletegreat to see that you listened to the recommendations and put these in place
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