Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, March 2, 2020
I am very naughty :/
We are involved in the Get NZ writing and we are writing poems based on William Carlos William's poem This is just to say.
Have you ever done something naughty? Be honest.
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Nice how you added something we know into the poem.
ReplyDeleteKIA ORA!!! I love your poem i remember in Mr Gs class we had to parodize this is just to say! your slide looks very clean and is organised very well.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could do better by using more convincing words. Cant wait for your next post!!!!