Tuesday, March 12, 2019
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Kia ora Fletcher! This was, uh.... interesting to read, (I'm going to try my hardest to keep this comment serious) I really felt like I could relate to the noob in this story, due to me always rage quiting in Jailbreak. Next time I would recommend going back and checking your work before posting (E.G. your grammar, capital letters, punctuation).
ReplyDeleteOtherwise I did really enjoy reading this, well done!
Thanks isabella ill definitely try your suggestions thanks for commenting on my blog
DeleteHi Fletcher. I like how you made your slideshow very interesting and funny.
ReplyDeleteIt was cool how you put a shark picture in from Roblox.
Maybe next time you could put more full stops in and maybe you could check were your putting capital letters and make sure that they go were you are putting them.
Thanks Matilda ill definitely try your suggestions thanks for commenting on my blog
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