Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, February 26, 2019
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Fletcher
ReplyDeleteit is good that you have put up a post this year. You would make this post more interesting by adding in why you liked rifles so much, what made the activity so good? Did other kids like this activity better than others?
thanks Mrs Pascoe thats a good idea and Ill definitly try out those suggestions.
ReplyDeleteGreat maturity to listen to feedback in an adult way hope we can see some more
ReplyDeleteHI MUM AGAIN
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